Ahhh... this essay...

In response to what Matt said about this essay, I agree it is a difficult topic to go into a lot of detail about.  However, it will write itself.  I found today already that by doing the conferences with our workshop groups I have already gotten some great feedback that I can use to dive further into my essay.  It seems as if there is many other routes that I can take that I have not thought about before until my group sat down today.

I think that when other people read what you write they get a good feel as to your style and parts of the essay that need some of your elaboration on.  For Matt's essay I was able to look at it and think from his point of view where he could put in more detail and at the same time have it be effective.  He seems to really be off to a great start.  

I am grateful for my group.  Each one brings something different to the table to help out each other.  Jodie is queen of grammar she corrects it all!  While Matt looks at the paper realistically and sees if it makes sense.  Whereas Christine tells you where you can go in more detail.  With the three of them looking at my essay I feel that I am in great hands!  Thanks guys! :)